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Friday Nov 02, 2007
 

Doing away with the 'Screenwriter'

The Cinema we know is no longer the cinema we have. The possibilities for making and writing cinema have never been more diverse, complex, sophisticated, hybridized and varied than they are now. Frankly there's never been a better time to be a screenwriter simply because there have never been so many screens to write for in so many forms and formats - theatrical, broadcast, feature, short, serial, online, streaming, download, mobile device, gaming, machinima, interactive, installation...

But to embrace those possibilities and exploit the opportunities there is a distinct cultural shift that has to happen in how we perceive the screenwriting process. It's time to stop thinking that a Screenplay has anything to do with Writing...

Francis Ford Coppola famously said "There is a misconception that we are surrendering something of art to a technology that will do it for us. That is never the case, cinema is technology." And yet whilst this idea is at the heart of all Movie-Making we still have a culture of Screenwriting that keeps the screenplay process somehow separate and apart from the rest of production. A culture that treats the screenwriter as a literary laborer toiling away in a dark room, arranging words in a literary endeavor.

But the screenplay is fundamentally removed for all other forms of 'writing' because it is wholly reliant on technology, indeed does not exist without it. Poem, Essay, Short Story, Novel all require nothing but words and a pace to inscribe them - dirt, cave wall, papyrus, paper. And whilst a stretching argument might be made to say that the Pen and the printing press are Technologies writing is certainly capable of existing without both.

Cinema by contrast certainly does not exist at all without the twin apperati of moving image Acquisition and moving image Display. Which brings us back to Coppola - "cinema is technology" - and a set of ironies and issues around the culture, method and perception of Screenwriting.

We may have dispensed with the typewriter in favour of the computer screen but the truth is that the great majority of tools for writing are little more than paper simulators. A whole range of dedicated contemporary screenwriting tools on the market (just as with word processors) do little more than construct screen-based re-creations of typed paper sheets for ring-binders and layouts of 3x5" index cards.

In this way, by the tools themselves, the silo of screenwriting - disconnected from production, from sound, from design, from storyboard and audio-visual concept, from location and space, is re-enforced. The screenwriter is pigeon-holed as a 'writer' like any other divorced from the technology that cinema cannot exist without. The screenplay's interpretation on the screen by a director is then re-enforced as a two-tier process whereby the screen-writer writes outside of and in abstraction of the audio visual construct of cinema and then has that construct applied to the screenplay after-the-fact.

Arguably the problem begins with the nomenclature itself. The name 'Screenwriter' is fundamentally wrong as the onus, through the word 'Writer' as the active part of the conjunction, is squarely on the act of 'writing, an art disconnected from technology and production and which of itself does not need technology and apparatus.

The name should by rights be 'Screenwright', just as Playwright. The connection being to a thing that is 'wrought' through tools, craft and construction. The Screenwright in this context evokes the same mantle as Shipwright, Wheelwright, Cartwright - the creators of the something that is 'wrought", built, assembled. And what is being Wrought is Not a collection paper and words, and certainly not a work of literature, but a Cinematic technology production.

Ultimately a screenplay is but one thing; a blueprint for production, an engineering plan for how a cinematic work may be constructed. And in this role it cannot, and does not, exist alone. Just as an architectural design requires more than the floor-plan dimensions a screenplay too is part of a package - storyboard, design concept, breakdown, sound plan and so on. These elements, like the architectural blueprint, are all just a means to an ends, all building blocks toward a complete cinematic product.

In architecture the blueprint, design sketch, perspective renderings, models, landscape, acoustics and lighting all directly influence each other. A aesthetically bold entrance might be reshaped to better fit the landscape. An interior altered to account for sound refraction. Window dimensions re-written on the blueprint to account of the the direction of the sun. All these elements are allowed and encouraged to influence the central plan - the building's screenplay.

And yet in traditional screen-writing there is a culture of forced separation, an entrenched idea that to allow production elements to influence the screenplay's creation is to somehow corrupt or limit the creative integrity of the 'writing'.

The Sydney Opera House, one of the great architectural works of the modern age, is scaled in such a way as to appear in perfect half-size proportion to the Sydney Harbour Bridge. No matter from where you look at the Opera House, from any angle, it always appears in perfect proportion to the bridge behind it. This is a work of architecture that is not just focused on itself but in its creation was acutely aware of its 'production' in the environment in which it sits. It makes perfect sense for the architectural 'writing' to be in concert and knowledge of the elements of production; allowing them to directly influence that creation. And yet we still most often  don't  treat the Screenplay in the same light.

This is not to say that the Screen-writer hasn't been capable of producing great works of cinema (or indeed that there hasn't always been cases of the singular Writer-Director where the writing is directly connect to production by way of coming from the singular person) but the culture of the Screen-Writer as opposed to Screen-Wright comes out of a very different cinematic landscape - one where cinema was a largely singular and unified medium. Now that cinema has opened up like a magnolia sprouting layers of variables, hybrids, alternatives and parallel forms (with much of the hierarchy of privilege associated with these forms dissolving)  the time exists to re-evaluate the culture of the Screenwriter.

Rather than simple paper simulation and digital replication of analogue processes we have an opportunity to explore how else a Screenplay might be 'wrought' in concert with technology rather than in abstraction of it. In broadstrokes this shift to the idea of 'Screenwright' is in essence about engaging a creative development process that is not just in concert with production but which is embedded in it. A process of screenwrighting that draws upon all elements of production; diverse elements from which the screenplay is wrought.

Comments:

You will always live in my future, as for me where you are it is tomorrow. So maybe I'm doomed to be behind you by twelve hours and that's why I can't always figure out what you're getting at.

I've been reading your blog for a couple of weeks now and, while interesting, I'm often left a bit puzzled. I'd appreciate it if you could be a bit less verbose; perhaps a little more direct. Maybe its a cultural difference, you living in tomorrow and all. Or perhaps it is the academic influence.

In this installment you spoke of, "the screenplay is fundamentally removed for all other forms of 'writing' because it is wholly reliant on technology". Putting aside that writing is a technology itself, I think you're saying that the goal of a screenplay is a movie and a movie must be created and displayed using technology. Is that what you're saying?

Well, is not a paper mill, printing press and book bindery necessary to get the novelist's work into the hands of the adoring public? So I don't think your saying that the other forms do not need technology but that in no other artistic form is the result changed so much by the entire process of creation.

So just as an architect's drawings are not intended to be the finished art, but the edifice it describes is. But a screenplay is akin to architectural renderings, conveying the aesthetics of the building. It is left to others to produce the detailed blueprints.

So it is with a screenplay. It presents the story while only sketches the characters and locations.

I propose that a screenplay contributes about one third of the creative input needed to produce a movie. Perhaps even less. The director, DP, production designer and editor all have enormous influence on the final product.

But I know that you know all of this. So that's why I'm puzzled. I still don't really know what point you're trying to make.

Warmest regards,

Rob:-]

Posted by Rob on November 02, 2007 at 05:03 AM EST #

Thanks for your comments Rob.

To get to the specifics - the point is exactly that "the screenplay is fundamentally removed for all other forms of 'writing". You make the point that Writing is a Technology. This is not by definition correct - writing is merely pictures, diagrammatic representations. A technology is an apparatus that aids a process. So a Pen is technology but writing is not. The fundamental difference is that the Printing Press, Binders, Books and paper Mills are NOT at all required for Writing to exist - my finger in sand is all thats needed for writing to exist. But CINEMA does not and cannot exist without the apparatus of image acquisition and display.

So in simple terms what im suggesting is that discussing a screenplay in literary terms is not useful or helpful because cinema, by its absolute existence within a technological apparatus which is unique from all other art-forms that use words (which are aided by but do not actually need technology to exist or be read), has nothing to do with words. Cinema IS technology. Writing only uses technology as a means for mass distribution.

In light of that I'm arguig that the term Screenwriter is problematic and the term Screenwright has a far more enabling logic to it.

The outcome..? I believe that the vast number of poor screenplays produced each year are more often than not the result of 'Screenwriters' attacking cinema from a literary perspective rather than Screenwrights who are crafting an audio/visual experience.

I hope thats not too verbose for you. Academic influence? Possibly, but more than a decade of dirty fingernail production experience i hope tempers the conceptual with the practical. Thanks for reading but I don't intend to alter the blogs style to account for your personal needs. Sorry...

Posted by Mike Jones on November 02, 2007 at 01:35 PM EST #

Thanks for responding to my comments. My method of reaching understanding is to challenge ideas and their underlying assumptions. This has gotten me into trouble before when people don't know me (and even when they do:). It wasn't my intention to challenge you personally. If it sounded that way, please accept my apology. (I keep telling myself that I'd rather be happy than right but but my ego keeps whispering to me that I have to be right to be happy.)

I think I am understanding your meaning better now. Let me put it to the test by putting it into my own words.

MY OWN WORDS
1. Cinema is unique among all the word-using art forms because it can only exist as the product of technology; specifically image and sound recording/reproduction technology.

2. A screenplay is not literature, but is a blueprint for the creation of a work of audio/visual art.

3. Many poor screenplays are the result of the author trying to create literature instead of a blueprint.

COMMENTS ON MY OWN WORDS
1. If this is what you mean then I agree. I can think of no counter examples.

2 & 3. I'm not sure I agree with this one. I am mostly familiar with spec scripts I've read at the Austin Screenwriters Group and for the Austin Film Festival screenwriting competition.

For a spec script to get optioned it's got to, first and foremost, be a good read. It's got to get by several levels of readers before it gets into the hands of someone who can consider taking it to the next level.

A script written on assignment or by the person who will produce or direct it is another story.

But, again, I'm quite sure you know all this so it makes me wonder if I'm not misunderstanding what you mean why you say, "the result of 'Screenwriters' attacking cinema from a literary perspective".

I do like your idea about being a screenwright instead of a screenwriter (although my spell-checker doesn't agree:).

CONCLUSION
Again let me apologize if my comments about "verbosity" and "academic influence" were too personal. My intention was to let you know how I have been affected by your writing. Obviously you have touched something in me or I wouldn't be spending all this time an effort to understand your meaning.

This comment has taken me at least two hours to write, read, edit, research and edit some more. I only comment on the those posts that pique my interest the most and only when I think I can truly add some value. In this case the addition of our comments has added value at least for me.

Again, thanks for a great blog.

Warmest regards,

Rob:-]

"Sorry for the long letter. I didn't have time to write a shorter one." -Samuel Clements

Posted by Rob on November 05, 2007 at 09:08 AM EST #

You worry too much Rob. No offense at all taken - my comments were all tongue-in-cheek. You pose some great questions. And similarly I make no pretense that the stuff churneed out here in my blog is well thought out or throughly considered; its more a running diatribe :P

Your comments re Austin Screenwriters Group and the need/desire/appeal of a screenplay that 'reads' well is a point well taken and one ignored by any writer at their own peril. The first audience is a reader. But this also needs to be considered in context. That writing/submitting a screenplay to be 'read' and judged on its 'reading' is fundamentally different in both audience and intention to the screenplay written to become a cinematic work. I doubt there's ever been a script that remained the 'same' between 'Reader' and 'Viewer'. Indeed a great many professional screenwriters talk of writing what amounts to two different versions - one for the submission to the reader and the other for the director/producer/production. And indeed both these will be fundamentally different to the Shooting Script itself.

The act of writing a screenplay with the preliminary intention of appealing to someone who will 'read' the screenplay is is certainly a process connected to Literature. But this is not to say that writing for the Reader is the same as writing for the Viewer or writing for Production.

The problem becomes when screenwriters get focused on a screenplay as literature with reading appeal. They end up with a good read but a flawed cinematic blueprint. A screenplay that works on-the-page rather than in-the-mind. A screenplay thats gets past the Reader but is flawed on screen.

Sadly the industry that has built up around film production has inserted those somewhat arbitrary 'readings' as part of a enforced filtration process. Subsequently too many screenwriters get focused on 'writing to be read' rather than 'writing to be seen and experienced'. Writing to be read is a very useful skill to get past those readers but the internal 'cinematic' cant be neglected because writing to be a good read is NOT the ultimate aim, its just a hurdle to get past to get to the main game.

let me try a simple example, one based on many screenplays Ive read over the years by both new and experienced writers.

The screenwriter needs to express that a character (Julie) is surprised. They could write -
a) Julie is shocked into a stunned stupor.
or
b) Julie's mouth falls open and her chewing gum rolls out.

The former is literary, the effect is on the page in the words, the effect is in alliteration and rhythm. The later is cinematic, its in the visual and the action. The event not the description. Its the old Showing not Telling adage.

Ive read far too many scripts that utilize 'a)' aiming at literature and the 'reader' and not 'b)' which is cinematic. The former comes from the Screenwriter the later comes from the Screenwright.

Now some will jump at this and say its Not the job of the writer to dictate direction or performance, thats up to the interpretation. This is absolutely true - but that process of interpretation is inevitable. All screen production is interpretive re-writing. The Director re-writes, the Performer re-writes, the Editor re-writes, the Sound designer re-writes. The 'script' will inevitably be re-written and interpreted but this should not deter the screenwright from writing cinematically, writing in cinematic action. Writing to be understood in visual terms not literary ones.

Thanks so much for your posts, very much appreciated. Glad you find something valuable enough here to warrant such consideration.

cheers
Mike

Posted by Mike Jones on November 06, 2007 at 04:36 PM EST #

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